CATS: First draft 1 on 1

I have just had my one on one with Sally about my first draft of my essay, it’s well written BUT! I kind of didn’t mention in my introduction what I really want to talk about, I need to narrow it down. And focus on 3 different theories about SOCIAL impact, COMMUNICATION impact and MULTIPLAYER in general. I also need to reference properly as I have put a whole resource as my reference instead of just the Author and the date in brackets.

Raph Koster
Game Studies
Jamie Madigan
Game Theory
Game Studies
Addiction (Multiplayer)

Have a balance of Online, Magazine and Academic references in the essay.



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